Saturday, June 6, 2009

Sacrilege

I weep
Tears of repulsive colours
Because you wrecked the bulwarks
That fueled a burning desire
Your implacable cultural measures
Have splashed into a million scourges

10 comments:

limp said...

a mouthful...an engaging mouthful.nice.btw, ur blog restricts comments to only blogspot users

James Tubman said...

dont cry baby

daddy's here for you lol

The poets voice ~~~ said...

Wow, wow and wow!!!
I love the blend of strong descriptive adjectives with beautiful imagery..the poem is short and concise yet there is a deep meaning behind it. love this!

lulu said...

wow you have sooooo grown poetically

Lindah said...

Thanks y'all, was try scratch something about Female Genital Mutilation. Will do more research and write a short story.

Emilia said...

This was really deep and when you said it bluntly i kind of got it...well written

Sassy Trends said...

Me love your poetry.. celebrating nature itself...

luvn this blog...
xoxoxo

NikkiSab said...

Dis is deeeeep!!!! I like very much. thanks for stopping by n i'm back to bloggin.

Oracle said...

Lindah, i'm sure you know what i'm about to say. I just don't know the exact words to use. I love the first line "I weep tears of repulsive colours"

lai xin said...

good