Tuesday, August 14, 2007


Is your life rough and cruel?
Full of suffering and misfortune?
Are you lacking joy and happiness?
And you think that God has forgotten you?

Look around! You are not alone
So many people have been battered
They encountered challenges
In this world that has no end…..

Do you lack the source of survival?
And you think about going dirty?
Think again! You mortal creature
Since the world began, many have perished.

Are you intelligent, rich and famous?
You are not the first, nor the last
Don’t be selfish and proud
Share your fair fortune.


The 27th Comrade said...


*Paces backwards ...*

Exits presence.

Da truf. :o)

Lindah said...

I messed up with line 13.....
Are you, intelligent and rich and famous?

Lindah said...

Tiz....Are you intelligent, rich and famous?

GERALD said...

God can't forget anyone. do you remember lot in the Bible

feather said...

sometimes it seems like that, like God really has forgotten you. then in His own sweet way, He reminds us that He hasn't.

Anonymous said...

Thank you for visiting. I am envious at your ability to be comfortable with words to create poetry. Writing Poetry is not for everyone,(like ME lol) but it is a talent, good for you for embracing it!

Quillonpaper said...

I like the irony in the "not the first nor the last" about your poem here. In a way we are the first and last, each of our kind, yet not the first nor last of our kind too! Almost like the in-between of mortality and immortality. Inspiring!

eddiie said...

You mortal creature
Since the world began, many have perished.
......yeah thats true...

Dennis D. Muhumuza said...

okay lady, points taken!!!