Sleep comes naturally sweet when you rest your head on a comfy pillow in a passionate pillowcase, so is poetry when shared.
The liquor on your breathDoes not make me dizzyI swear I breathed in the kiss of a girl that was scented with wine, one of these past days. There is roughly no better aphrodisiac under Jah Sun. Good Lord, it was beautiful.
ha ha, comrade! gal when did u begin falling for dudes whose breath are stained by liquor?i must however concede that those two first lines alone make u nearly a genius. i wish the poem had stopped there!
I love your poems, they are short and straightforward.I could use five lines just to explain one point, I wish I could make mine shorter with all the points made.Nice poem, keep it rolling girl
I stopped by to say Happy Valentines Day, Lindwee. Enjoy.Good spirited woman.I got the second stanza, but I'm not sure about the meaning behind the first.
Beautiful my dear!
@Comrade, really! that must have been V&A@Cb,Hmmm...I.....@Oracle, Thanks. I enjoy yours too.@Gerald, Munange...@don, The first stanza means that love is patient.@B-more bap life, Welcome back gal!@y'all, thanks.
That breath definitely sent me to hell...lets just say I've been there and it turned me off!
@ lindwee: thanks.
@Kellos, I visited. Good start!
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