Sleep comes naturally sweet when you rest your head on a comfy pillow in a passionate pillowcase, so is poetry when shared.
Simple yet touching...I would have simply said...Pleasssssssssse don't go.
Damn lindwee, get your hands out my pocket...lolSo true, so true.
okay, im not one for poetry so im having a hard time intepreting this one...coz of the "live" and "leave" there in the last two lines... help!!!
Me too Tand
Reading this, I had a song playing on my mind. It was done by a Nigerian/ German girl. Not sure if you know her - Ayo Ogunmakin. I think the lines were - Down on my knees, I'm begging you, Please don't leave me. Good writ. Thanks for stopping by
Wow, short and spot-on. I love it!
@afrobabe,he pleaded in vain!@don, not yet.@tadra, he wanted to live, she took his life.@be silent,she packed, he wept.@comrade,I don't know her but will find out.@Andy,thanks.
Now..whose missing the other more?But great poem.Short but speaks gallons and gallons of sense..Keep goin..
everytime i come here...your poetry still manages to yank the carpet from my feet...and leaves me breathless!
@eddiie,they have different hearts so it is difficult to measure the misses.@esquire of the mountain,really!@y'all,thanks!
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