I will miss you
You will miss me
I can not live this way
You can not leave that way
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Simple yet touching...
I would have simply said...Pleasssssssssse don't go.
Damn lindwee, get your hands out my pocket...lol
So true, so true.
okay, im not one for poetry so im having a hard time intepreting this one...coz of the "live" and "leave" there in the last two lines... help!!!
Me too Tand
Reading this, I had a song playing on my mind. It was done by a Nigerian/ German girl. Not sure if you know her - Ayo Ogunmakin. I think the lines were - Down on my knees, I'm begging you, Please don't leave me. Good writ. Thanks for stopping by
Wow, short and spot-on. I love it!
@afrobabe,he pleaded in vain!
@don, not yet.
@tadra, he wanted to live, she took his life.
@be silent,she packed, he wept.
@comrade,I don't know her but will find out.
@Andy,thanks.
Now..whose missing the other more?
But great poem.
Short but speaks gallons and gallons of sense..
Keep goin..
everytime i come here...your poetry still manages to yank the carpet from my feet...and leaves me breathless!
@eddiie,they have different hearts so it is difficult to measure the misses.
@esquire of the mountain,really!
@y'all,thanks!
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