I can feel the pain inside my heart
For the turning of the world upside down
Many people dying now and then
Because of AIDS
Many children living without parents
And they end up becoming street kids
Begging here and there, now and then
Because of no aid
So what shall we do?
In order to fight this scourge
Coz we need to get together
Fighting against AIDS requires unity
AIDS is dangerous
And Deadly
It got no cure
We should be careful
About this disease
Abstinence is the way
For teenagers
And faithfulness for married
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Continue to spread the awareness, Lindwee.
not to forget some got it through other means...
Lets pray for all who live with it and hope a cure comes soon...
thanks for this tribute for World's AIDS day i spent some time on saturday trying to write something of worth to chronicle the event but couldn't
i likey
The piece is great. AIDS is no respector (wo)man. I'll be glad if everybody was faithful to themselves..
@don, yeah.....
@afrobabe, true, thats why we need unity coz we can get it through different ways but this is one of the most vivid ones. Thanks for contributing.
@kafo, thaks too. I spent 4hrs looking for my ribbon, i cried when i discovred that it had been eaten by evious cockroaches.
Thank God my Sister lent me hers
good one, touching words.... to spread the awareness.
Hi Lindwee...thanks for posting a comment on my blog, because otherwise, I may not have stumbled across your blog...
What a great way to spread the awareness about AIDS!
a very good ant- AIDS activist...keep up lady..
nobody shouls cajole to go bear footed......
stockings.... make the compulsary
@seejmasinde, me too.
@maxine, thanks.
@sage, thanks too. I have added you on my Rollers.
@gerald, true.
Hmmmmmm....how lovely!!
We certainly need to stand together to get over that disease...
Blogger, we have a responsibilties...
@ Lindwee: Thanks for the luv, girl!
Lindwee,
I am a regular visit to your blog. While I love your spirit and your posts, I am not feeling this particular poem. It is too literal.
While you may argue that the issue calls for it, I am sure you could have done a better job with the language and style to keep it from being so sing-songy.
Keep up the spirit.
@eddie, absolutely!
@sage, thanks too.
@omutahinga, true! it is lyrical but i decided to keep it short.
@y'all, thanks for visiting and have a lovely weekend.
seek and ye shall find it's a cure out there
somebody will find it
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